I still hear it
Whenever I hear any voice
Which come from darkness
I open my eyes
N wake up from bed
Thinking that it is of yours
To see u, I look around
But, all in vain, there would be no one
Except darkness
But, I still hear your voice
I still hear it
The voice which comes from the darkness
I still hear it
Thinking that it is of yours
As if u are calling my name
I still hear it
But, I know it is not u
I know it isn’t u
U are very far from me
U will now never come back
Coz, I was not with u
When u needed me, my help n my love
The darkness that took u away
I hate it
I hate that darkness
Sometimes, in your rememberance,
I want to enter into that darkness
So that we can be together again
Reunited again
Will there be happiness again
At the story’s conclusion
Or will just be an endless pain
Same as before
In a lonely night,
I hear the sound of u whisper
I still hear your voice
From the darkness
That took u away from me
U are still in this heart
Till its last beat
I lost my destiny
Without u
I don’t know where my life is going
Without u,
In your absence
But, I still hear your voice
❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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Good evening dear friend
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Gorgeous poem, I can really relate my myself with this , as line came ‘I can hear you wisper’ , I was really imagining myself that someone is whispering, beautiful poem …
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It an honour to receive such beautiful words, thank you so very much
Kepp visiting my blog
Enjoy reading and appreciating 😍
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It was pleasure reading it!!
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Dear Nirja, This is a truly wonderful love poem of intimate feelings and yearnings! The heartfelt feelings expressed here bring tears to one’s eyes.
This was such a moving piece that spoke to me from your seeds of inspiration and they blossomed into a new piece, my “I STILL HEAR YOUR VOICE”. I am so indebted to you for this!
Thank you so much,
Chuck
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I am really grateful, thank you so very much for those lovely words. It definately inspires me to write more and worthy.
I am actually so happy, this was something I wrote like 12 years ago. And, I was like off from writing but now I having my passion for writing back again. I am really trying to write better these days.
Keep visiting my blog. Take care
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I will keep visiting! I will be looking for more beautiful seeds of inspiration! I have a number of poems on the process of writing that you might enjoy? Tell me what you think of “The Reluctant Poet”? If you like that I can dig up the title of some others!
I find it very inspiring to sit in the darkness late at night or in the hours prior to 6 a.m. and listen to the clock tick, tocking and just let your mind wander. I like to get a start in my head and then add line upon line by reciting them outloud until I get 8 or ten lines and then write them down. I find writing with my eyes closed is helpful most of the time. The other thing is to just do “Stream of Consciousness” writing at the computer. Just write a few words and follow them like a trail to wherever your mind leads you. Just me!
Chuck
xo
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Thank you 🙂
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Thank you so much, its an honor 😍
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